Lovely Torture... (Poem)

I hope to find, One with a mind, Hopefully like mine, Just more kind, With more time, And a better rhyme.

I want to know, What I feel, Through the Black Snow, If it’s real?

What’s with negativity? You love and know me! You know what to say. Don’t wait for another day. I don’t want to be alone, Though I know the fault is my own, And mine alone.

Answer #1

its alright but it rymes to much :)

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