would he love me?-poem do you like it?

love is a battle that can not be won love is something that can’t be undone love is life love is passion love is about reaction we all encounter it in our own way atleast we will one day that day will be one you will never forget though you may regret making that decision this had cleared your vision because every tear has made you stronger every tear has made you that much,bigger,better, the best you can be just think to yourself would he help me would he care for me would he love me would he…

this is a poem but in some ways and parts I could turn it into a song. but I just want your opinion. I don’t think it’s that good,

Answer #1

thx:)

Answer #2

Not bad at all.

Answer #3

thx:)

Answer #4

actually thats pretty neat, I like it a lot. really nice job :)

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