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I wrote this song please tell me how it is (:

you said to her, no more broken hearts you fall for him, but you want more again pick yourself up, why even try broken pieces in his hand wondering how he will even make it again.

(c) you know, youll say. something gotta change youll cry, youll pray, is this the way and change this porcelain heart of mine.

someone said a broken heart will leave you marks, then youll be strong in the end. you ask why does this remain where they made to just break?

youll cry, youll pray, is this the way

and change this porcelain heart of mine.

he’s here in your life. please give me one more try but please dont break this porcelain heart of mine.

youll cry, youll pray, is this the way

and change this porcelain heart of mine.

please dont break this porcelain heart of mine

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Answer #1

I sorta have music for it I mean I have the toon and stuff. and thanks I love writing songs and looking at other people’s also (: lol

Answer #2

It sounds great! I write songs all the time, so I love reading other peoples work. Do you have the music for it too, or just lyrics?

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