I wrote a song^^

ok I wrote a song please tell me if you like it ~~~they say they can’t look at me (3x)

while I scream, out my sorrow and pain, I hide the secret, from every f*ing one

no one cares, no one gives a dam about me, why do they just sit and laugh, they say they shall not look at me, I say I shall gouge out, THEIR EYES (repet)

only (only), if they saw the real me so my love (my love) KILL ME NOW

only (only) if I could escape this hell (this hell) so my love (my love) never lie to me

(…)

stop laughing at me (3x) stop it (2x) stop it now!~~~

do you like it what should I call it???

Answer #1

umm..I dont listen to that type of music, but the lyrics are creative, the title should be “Stop laughing at me.”

um..do you really feel this way???..if so you should get some help..

Answer #2

Unlike the first 2 answers,it was amazing to me,keep it up.

Answer #3

I like it! its amazing I think you should call it Stop My Sorrows

Answer #4

ty for your opions

Answer #5

WHAT THE FUkkk GOUGE OUT THERE EYES!

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