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I wrote a song, please be honest!!!

It’s now lost, And it can’t be found Cause no ones around To search and find

It’s all over And it can’t go on What we had is gone and gone

I miss you, I’ve cried over this for so long I miss you It’s finally done, now your gone But I’m here Left in this place, All alone Alone… Still loving you, all alone

It’s finished, all over Put to rest in the grave of our memories

And time, Time can be cruel And steal all your moments away But here, safe with me they’ll stay

I miss you, I’ve cried over this for so long I miss you It’s finally done, now your gone But I’m here Left in this place, All alone Alone… Still loving you, all alone

And I’ve tried So hard To tell myself, that it’s fine Okay But what I say, It’s not what I mean

I miss you, I’ve cried over this for so long I miss you It’s finally done, now your gone But I’m here Left in this place, All alone Alone… Still loving you, all alone

And so now, As I lay here I sit. And rewind And I play back the memories That set in my mind

And I lay my hand down On my skin covered chest Only to find, nothing beating there

I miss you, I’ve cried over this for so long I miss you It’s finally done, now your gone But I’m here Left in this place, All alone Alone… Still loving you, all alone

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Answer #1

it’s ohhh my gushhh it’s good from where all come dear fau dose a girl hurt u ???/

Answer #2

Honestly I thought the song was very cliche. I compliment your effort, and I can tell by your writing that you have the potential to be a great songwriter…Sometimes you put too much of yourself in the song…Try a different approach to the same subject

                                                              Love, Vanessa

Answer #3

the happy song better!!

Answer #4

I think it’s really good :)

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