love and loveless poem, what do you think?

if you think that I am weird then your wrong. I am misunderstood. I am always told that I am an amazing poetry writer. heres a poem that I hope you will like. I am sorry if you don’t like it. I just need to know if this is an ok poem or not.

                                                     LOVE AND LOVELESS

I am a girl with ice blue eyes my hair is as black as the midnight sky (dirty brown) my face is always down in a frown except when my friend cheney is around she puls me up and makes me smile but then when she’s gone I am dead for a while she makes this life of mine so much easier for me she makes my life fun and comes to me when asked she has the touch of an angel I guess she has the true love of a friend the is and I am the on who is the loveless end I try to be happy to show her I care but then when shes around theres no way that not fair she makes my life fun and totally easy and makes it a small game for her to try and tease me.

POST ANY COMMENTS OR PREJUDICES THAT YOU MAY HAVE I DON’T CARE BECAUSE I KNOW THAT SHE IS ALWAYS GOING TO BE HERE. THANKS AGAIN. BYE-BYE.

Answer #1

yea its very amazing, but im not kind of person who understand poetry very well, so you r in love with your best friend? thats what im getting from that

Answer #2

I’ve red your poems they make me cry with happiness, do you have a book out if you do funmail me were I can get it, if you dont then what are you w8ting 4 funmail me when your masta pieces are open to the world

Answer #3

thank you cheney. :)

Answer #4

some spots didn’t really flow, but I think it expresses emotion really really really well, describes feeling I have, wow keep writing xx minalae

Answer #5

That made me feel good, Randi.

Answer #6

[tears and cries] that was beautiful…

lol I liked it! it’s so…strong!! and meaningful… nice poem!

Answer #7

Kick AS*!!!

Answer #8

I like it. it’s awesome

Answer #9

OMG your awesome!! I love your poems

Answer #10

it was all iiight

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