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DO YOU LIKE MY SONGS

Hey, I have written lots of songs and here is one of them please tell me if you like it

              I NEED YOU

4 I wanna go back to that place
4 where I saw your face

   I new there was a connection
   you were showing your affection

CHORUS

   I dont no what to do 
   when im without you 
   im afraid my soul 
   might loose control
   no I dont no what to do 
   when I've got the blues
   I need you 
   to get me through


   when I see you in the hall 
   leaning up against the wall
   I get a feeling 
   that im screaming

   kiss me baby 
   I need to feel your heart 
   kiss me baby 
   I dont wanna part

CHORUS x2

   yes I do 
   I need you

well thats it I hope you like it

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Answer #1

yeah im a sing / song writer to an di think its fab , really like it weldone , you ever thought of recording them in a studio ?? getting someone to produce a tune , unless you are that cleaver you do that anyway lol :D songs really goos looks like its meaningfull as well.

Answer #2

I have thought about it but where I live there is no way that I would b able to do that and even before I do that (im not sayn I suck) I should get singing lessons just to strengthem my voice a little more I might release a copy of it on youtube then c what people think lol thx ily and coming from u (a sing/song writher) that means a lot thx ily ily ily xxx

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