is this good to be part of a song?

I feel missplaced like a puzzle piece like a missing page like a fallen leaf like a fish on a hook

and I feel traped in a cage im going through lifes maze im sing’in like a bird hang on to my every word

(yay,nay,or gay)

Answer #1

I think they gay

Answer #2

yep, I think both verses are pretty good

Answer #3

they ok

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