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Nightmare:

The night has fallen so peacefully The dark has come, now surrounding me And I, I’ve lost my sight

The day has put up quite a fight But now I’m left standing here Facing the dark, my greatest fear

And this whole thing is like a nightmare Waking me up in great despair Taking all it get from my dreams ripping my reality from the seems This whole thing is like a night mare Leaving me breathless, in a scare This whole thing is like a nightmare

The dusk has said its last goodbye Darkness left to claim the sky And I, I start to fall asleep

In my heart the sun I keep But once the moon breaks the black I can’t remember where its at

And this whole thing is like a nightmare Waking me up in great despair Taking all it get from my dreams ripping my reality from the seems This whole thing is like a night mare Leaving me breathless, in a scare This whole thing is like a nightmare

Breaking reality my dreams unfold Technicolor thoughts break the mold Dream catchers lost and gone

I’m trying my hardest to keep holding on But you’re making it to hard to set free Cause you’re like a reoccurring nightmare to me

And this whole thing is like a nightmare Waking me up in great despair Taking all it get from my dreams ripping my reality from the seems This whole thing is like a night mare Leaving me breathless, in a scare This whole thing is like a nightmare

The night has fallen so peacefully The dark has come, now surrounding me And I, I’ve lost my sight

The day has put up quite a fight But now I’m left standing here Facing the dark, my greatest fear