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Confessions poem, feedback?
I have a confession to make This life of mine is all a mistake I hear the lies that I say every day They seem so true though so am I lame?
I look away and in my head I hear the truth that I want to say I look at you and find a way
My confession to you Is that I am alone And that your the only That will talk on the phone I hear they reason that I want you But I am so scared I wonder do you too?
My confession is spilled and my heart is a leaf As it falls to the ground so gracefully And the tears in my eyes begin to fill But then they all start to spill
The time has come for me to go And the pain is in the fact that I am all alone When the tears start to fall You wipe them away And then you tell me You are here to stay
You have a confession all your own And that confession is that you are so alone. When the tears well up in your troubled eyes I lean in and kiss you till the sun don’t shine
This confession we made Both ourselves Is that I love you forever and well Thank you for loveing me so kind so sweer We are both here So just listen and don’t skip a beat.
Please give any comments. I don’t care anymore. Thanks for reading. Love lots, Emodancer.
By the way what do you think good or bad? I need to know. Please tell me. Good or bad like dislike?
why do you keep doing that? “pretty bad” I mean give reasoning or something, just try to tell why you say that. omg thats so mean and juat try to give an F*ING REASON!!!111
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