Can you comment my poem??

My heart breathes inside her eyes, And drowns within her saddest tears. These clothes are my disgize, But in a room of a thousand mirrors, I always know who I am inside. We can search all around this world, To figure out where perfection hides. A thousand roads without mistakes, But a thousand roads will end one day. My heart breathes inside her eyes, And drowns within her saddest tears. I’ve been through a thousand trys, I could try a thousand years. My mind takes me for a walk, But my heart never wants to go. I’ve seen the world a thousand times, But this time is the first time, I remembered my way back home.

Answer #1

You know this poem is beautiful it shows great emotion, you have great style. I enjoyed it very much, you must publish it online or on a newspaper, its gold!. Kudos. -Lizzie

Answer #2

I have to agree with everyone here. It’s amazing!!! One of the best poems I have ever read! Send it to a newspaper or something. Write some more poems and get them published in a book. Wow!!!

Answer #3

omg its so beautiful!!!I’ve seen some really awesome poems that my friend writes and you probably beat her by just a lil ^.^

Answer #4

that was a really wonderful poem. I loved it

Answer #5

that was real good one of the best I’ve heard its gold.

Answer #6

that was the best poem I have ever read!!! I love it!!!

Answer #7

Love it.

Answer #8

that was awsum!!! totes cool!!!

Answer #9

its BEAUTFUL! its amazing I luv it! you should send that 2 someone and get it published!!! =]

Answer #10

oh my! I really love your poem!!

Answer #11

Another great poem..your extremly talented matt. ^.^ this ones really good.

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