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I found a place one summers day, I knew that every moment was true, Then I found a familiar face, And it was you,

When dreams await, You find them close, Sometimes love is just the most, I needed your affection, But you never gave, You know where to find me, When dreams await.

to wait forever and long, for that kiss, the one that, you wouldnt want to miss, but now youre gone,

People say love Comes and goes, but They don’t understand What they don’t know Cause, what I feel starts Deep inside It’s kinda like a sea That springs into life

They say it’s not right And we move too fast But they don’t know the meaning Of what we have

Wherever it is, I’ll fly Whatever it takes, I’ll try So don’t pay no mind To whatever people say Whenever it is in my life Know that I will be on time ‘Cause you know why There’s no standing in our way, cause we will be together till the very last day.

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It’s a cute poem, but sometimes it rhymes and sometimes it doesn’t.

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