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Bored, what do you think of my poem?
Puppet Master Sunday, February 24, 2008
Dear Puppet Master, You have me Strung, You’ve rendered my limbs, And robbed my tongue; You’ve stolen my sweet innocence, I’m your porcelain sin.
Your weathered hands Dangle my daintily From your mingled strands; I’m a lost soul, Yours to control.
I dance and prance Amongst the monasteries Of your twisted mind, Neath a darkened visage Infernal eyes glare, Harboring an icy passion; I’ve become brandished inside, Light fades from my vision, All fades into a mirage.
You’ve subjected me into submissive terms, But head my words the tables will turn. For now without giving fret I shall linger here from your wicked marionette
I opened this expecting it to be the usual poem-that-is-good-but-not-brilliant, and wow did I gasp. It’s an original idea, and I haven’t seen many of them around lately.:) It’s really good. Agreed it is a bit freaky, reminds me of a story I once read. But it’s fresh and new, and the only reason it’s ‘freaky’ is because it is out of the ordinary. Brilliant Britz
wow…
^_^
amazingly amazing!!!
I like it, but can I have your asl please and add me as your friend if you r a boy not older than 17
interesting and a bit freaky
NOTE: The picture I have uploaded in the corner there inspired it
VERY GOOD…
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