Your thoughts?

I think I’ll call this “your knife”…

Past pain Is future gain The tears Caused fears You killed My will

From the burn I learned To detect And protect The parts Of my heart

You killed What I built Your pride Wasted my time My joy Was your toy

Like your slave I worked, I gave My everything For nothing Your knife Took my life…

I might add more, but that’s what I have for now…

Answer #1

wow awesome! I love how short the lines are, it really brings essence!! and you’ve used the exact word to capture everything!

Answer #2

wow your really amazing!!!

I love all your poems there amazing!

I think you should keep writing

I feel the same way about it too :)

Answer #3

That is really good, please add more.

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