What do you think of this song I wrote?

Hey, I am the song writer for my band but I’m worried that I won’t write good enough songs for them so I was wondering if you could give your opinion on this song I wrote. Thanks guys!

It’s called A Romeo and Juliet Tale and about the story between them

Poison Slipping down my throat now I’ll reach for the dagger And this life is over

Fear Twisted into lasting hate Drives us into maddening fate Sinking into our romance Dreaming of our first glance Smiles behind our ball masks I knew it would last

Poison Slipping down my throat now I’ll reach for the dagger And this life is over Your body next to mine Holding onto me I’ll reach for the dagger See you in my heaven

Star-crossed Moving into destiny Underneath a balcony Vows spoken romantically Family Oh, let them disagree You and I were meant to be I already said I do!

Poison Slipping down my throat now I’ll reach for the dagger And this life is over Your body next to mine Holding onto me I’ll reach for the dagger See you in my heaven

Tears Drowning me in sorrow No time for tomorrow Please next time wait for me To wake up to you be free Our story of woe Let’s let it go

Nervous now XD

Answer #1

That’s really good! And youcould definatley do poetry!

Answer #2

Nice!! I like it!! What kind of music do you play? Im in a band also (I got the marvelous job of drumming) and yet after being together for two months we still do not have a name! Good luck and dont be nervous I’m sure it will sound awsome!

Answer #3

yep. agreement. its great.

Answer #4

That’s a good song (:

Answer #5

I like it :) !!!

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