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Who Can Help Me With This Song?

This is the chorus. I need ONE MORE LINE to complete it. by the way… Im HOPELESS! I cant think of a line that will fit. none of them seem to… work.HERE IS THE CHORUS OF THE SONG

She knows she was wrong but she can’t cry so she starts to write a song A song based on her li…iii…iiife A song based on her li…iii…iiife She cant cryyy …

-the dot dot dot… equals an extra line I need to add.-

btw I KNOW this would work better if you hear the melody first but there is NO WAY im posting, me singing on a website.

Oh and thanks 4 the person who helped me with the chorus of the song in the first place I LOVE YOU!

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Answer #1

She knows she was wrong But she can’t cry So she writes a song A song based on her liiiffe A song based on her Life She can’t cryyy She wants to die Tofall down and die

Answer #2

she feel’s it’s over drowning in her lie

…eh sorry I..tried? Good luck figuring it out though, what you’ve done sounds interesting so far though

Answer #3

She feels she ahs to die.

*For the 2nd ‘A song based on her li…iii…iiife’, instead of it being life, I think you should use ‘A song based on her lies’ (:

Answer #4

She knows she was wrong but she can’t cry so she starts to write a song A song based on her li…iii…iiife A song based on her li…iii…iiife She cant cryyy im down on my knees so help me please

Answer #5

thx

Answer #6

has**

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