What do you think theese sound like good bad what?

ok I wrote some things and I wanted to know what you think I know they arent as great as they could be but I want to know what you think please???

I want you to be the one holding me in your grasp I want you to be the one to say I love you and kiss me I want you to be the guy that loves me forever because no matter how hard I try not to I will love you forever

You are the guy of my dreams you talk to me like im not even important when I think of you like you are my life my sun my stars that is why it is so hard for me to say this but I am in total love with you! I have screamed and fought not to be but I cannot deny how I feel anymore I have held it in too long

but you wont even talk to me the way you used to so I dont know why I waste my time trying to talk to you because you dont think of me as more than a best friend!

Answer #1

just to be writing becaus ei cant tell the guy they are about all of this

Answer #2

What are youu writing it for? (: <3

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