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My confusing poem good or bad? Titled WHO?

If I am me You arent me But you are you And im not you if you arent I and I arent you Then who is that in the corner? Is that you? or is that I? Now that I arent you And you arent I.

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Answer #1

I really like it jeje but it should talk a little more about the corner part. aww that made me sad

Answer #2

its a little confusing. it sounds like youre saying the same thing over and over again. and your grammar could use some work.

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