What do you think of this Song/Prayer/Poem I wrote?

I Imagine!

I imagine of a little girl, too hold her in my arms, I imagine of her beauty, & her lovely precious charm, I imagine she has big blue eyes, with natural curly hair, I imagine she is smiling at me, while she is standing there, I imagine sharing stories & laughing until dark, I imagine her in the playground & skipping through the park, I imagine she is playing, Piano in the band, I imagine her with me, as we walk hand in hand, I imagine her with hair clips & glitter on her face, I imagine her with perfume, & how she gives out grace, I imagine her with Daddy, up on his shoulders too, & when she speaks she says those words, “Hey Mummy I love you”, I imagine her Preaching & writing songs too sing, I imagine she is Singing, for the Savior Lord our King, I imagine all these Wonderful things, for my Desire is So strong, I imagine every single day, that’s why I wrote this Song!!

21st October 2008 Irene

Answer #1

:-) we have 4 gorgeous boys & we are now praying for a little girl, she would complete our family!! thanks also for your nice words! x

Answer #2

OMG Thats actually really beautiful, Keep this up its amazing!!! I actually feel like crying it’s so beautiful :’(

Answer #3

AWW ty so much both of you xx

Answer #4

aww silverwings ty so much, I think I may look into it to get it copyrighted, I may also psss it to my church and see what they can do (music wise) I think you are right about God speaking to us through songs,

I have felt the Lord speak to me that he gave me these words for a purpose and I believe it was to let Mothers with daughters themselves to know and realise how truly blessed they are and appreciate the fact that they have daughters!

bless you xx

Answer #5

Oh.. that is sooo lovely…

It gave me chills… has to have been inspired.

Have you thought about submitting it to someone for publication?

You can get it copywrited… I did, several that the Lord had given me, it is neat… and not too hard.

The country song that was mentioned above, is a good idea, many times, the Lord speaks to the whole country, thru country songs.

Be blessed…

Answer #6

I can hear this as a country song

Answer #7

aww really, omg thank you so so much xx

Answer #8

I thought it was great, keep up the good work

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