What do you think of this poem? Prison boy?

A prison boy came home one day, To find his love had gone away, And when he asked the reason why, With these few words she did reply; If you had lead an honest life, I’d gladly be your loving wife, But as you lead a life of crime, Prison boy ‘do your time’… The next day they found him dead, And by his bed, a letter read; Dig my grave and dig it deep, Plant red roses by my feet, Put two white doves upon my stone, So I shall never be alone, All you girls, bare in mind, That a prison boy is hard to find, So if you find one love him too, Because a prison boy would die for you.

What you think???

Answer #1

I love it, it sounds beautiful. nice job. :)

Answer #2

I like it your really good :D

Answer #3

thats well good :)

Answer #4

u like it!:) it’s pretty good!

Answer #5

Not bad at all, six out of ten.

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