What do you think of my special song 'The Wish'?

Everyday you hear on the news about a big family losing their stocks and even their money Some always wonder what the heck they do with it other than investing to help a deserving community I always wonder if they ever think about lower families struggling to find food like honey They always think they have made a change in someone else’ lives but did they really? I’m not sure anybody sees how hard it is for those kinda families to make through just one day They have no money - no warm clothes - and no clean water so they can bathe

When will we be saved and given a better life (2x) I always feel like the next day will be our time to really survive Some people just don’t see how good they got it Hearing someone say we’re saved will be the best thing to ever happen for families

Spend one day in their shoes with no special gadgets just your own body Look how they live and you’ll see what they go through to provide for an entire house hold I know you wouldn’t last less than 2 hours in their house even without that precious money They have to walk on their bare feet through rocks and stones and even have to make their own food bowl You guys got it all handed to you but you just never get how they seriously live Watch it on your humungous tv set while they don’t even have entertainment not even a freaking stove

When will we be saved and given a better life (2x) I always feel like the next day will be our time to really survive Some people just don’t see how good they got it Hearing someone say we’re saved will be the best thing to ever happen for families

You go on the news talking about your big success and people asking what will you do next Pretty simple in most eyes and that’s selfishness and you know that’s what it is How are you able to drive while all they can do is walk everywhere they need to go hoping for the best If you look into their eyes you’ll see lots of hope just hoping they make it another day like this Quiet in your living area but they have to listen to dirty water and crickets in their own rooms Don’t you think they deserve better and not use buckets as their bathrooms WOW You never thought of it that way huh?

When will we be saved and given a better life I always feel like the next day will be our time to really survive Some people just don’t see how good they got it Hearing someone say we’re saved will be the best thing to ever happen for families

Give them a better life is what they always ask for Find it in your money filled hearts and be human for once That’s all they ask for so they don’t have to live this poor Once you see what they go through you’ll want to keep giving back with your every chance It’s not right how they have to live and you know it’s true Invest into their community they could may just appreciate you

When will we be saved and given a better life (3x) I always feel like the next day will be our time to really survive Some people just don’t see how good they got it Hearing someone say we’re saved will be the best thing to ever happen for families

What do you think of it?

song written by maggot4

Answer #1

its actually pretty good

Answer #2

I really like it (:

Answer #3

WOW! Those are awesome lyrics!!:)

Answer #4

That’s a beautiful song!!

Answer #5

wow this is beautiful mind me sing this for a singing comp ?

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