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My daily poem piece:maybe it will be put together someday
I have many masks I dont know whitch one to wear Im tired of spending these dark cold nights Forcing myself to try to care
Is there something wrong here Or is this how life is No one to hold my hand No one that ill miss
Long time coming,temporary healing, Wash off the red paint Still the bloods revealing
[its a dark one today folks]
Nice poem.
But you have spelled a word wrong. whitch is which.
Anywho, overall its a really deep poem.
I know a really interesting website you might find interesting.
Its...
poemhunter.com
You can make an account and post as many poems as you want.
And other people comment on them and even share other poems with you.
Its a really cool website. You can read other poems and share thoughts.
Let me know if you make an account.
=)
Honestly, I think it is very dark and you shouldn't focus on dark things, only focus on the light and positive things. Your poems will become better and you will feel better about yourself also.
^ ah greed. you have talent, dont depress your readers. keep the dark ones to yourself and maybe your talent will shine through.
very kool..but at the same time its sad. Smile :-)
ill put a happier one up tm
VERY SAD.
