poem, what do you think??

You said you knew, so I let you in, Lying to me is your common sin I know you help me, but it makes it worse Everything we change becomes a curse Seeing your plans Knowing your game Makes me angry that you can’t take the blame I may not care, but neither do you You’ve found parts of me that I never knew, But that doesn’t mean you can make me see, The piece of me that I don’t want to be.

Answer #1

thanx ali!! I’ll put more up if you want…

Answer #2

We’re doing Sylvia Plath in school (some great poet), that’s better then all of hers.

Answer #3

wow. You write beauitiful poetry. I think its very good (:

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