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By the waters of life we sat together, Hand in hand,in the golden days, Of the beautiful early summer weather, When skies were purple and breath was paradise. Come live with me,and be my love, And we will some new pleasures prove, Of golden sands,and crystal brooks, With silken lines,and silver hooks. Daisy,Daisy.give me your answer,do! I’m half crazy all for the love of you! It won’t be stylish marriage, I can’t afford a carriage, But you’ll look sweet upon the seat, Of a bicycle built for two.

Answer #1

Isnt that a song? - only know the chorus so not sure if its a plagurised verse or not! still - it’s ok.

Answer #2

COOL UHHH…10 FOR THE FIRST PART BUT THE ENDING GETS A 6

Answer #3

wow. thats a nice poem. I’d rate 9/10

Answer #4

Awhh [: Probably a 8.5

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