What do rate my poem?

I’ve been thinking a lot lately about my past. I don’t have any sort of bad past just a weird one… Here it is, in a nutshell. ha just rate the poem if you choose to :)

she wrote of a small animal spoke of the one that was my name back when I was loved, it faded to quick shame. soggy apologies It was misunderstood fame, no longer was I loved; I had lost the game. long after, we meet at a chance, And I see that they’ve changed, conversation; an awkward dance; it would never be the same.

fleeting white wings of the burning angel flickering beauty burned out to darkness.

Answer #1

MARVELOUS!!! :D 20/20

Answer #2

holy wow! that is goood! =D best I’ve seen ever I think.

Answer #3

10 , very good , you’re really talented :)

Answer #4

10/10 awesome poem write more!

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