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Rate a poem. :)

Just a poem I wrote, could be stupid, wannna know what you guys think, just take a look. :)

             Could only be love

A fading light against the rising sun, Whisper into my ear, things you have done. Angel of my dreams, my craving for sin. Surely you are the heaven I have seen.

A saviour in the evening shadows. In your eyes, the dusk that ends my sorrows. But the cold in your touch, death in your soul… Creeps into me, leading me to the fall.

Then the grace in your moves weighs over me. The delicacy of your skin sets me… Into a trance, it could only be love. Got us so high it could only be love.

:)

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Answer #1

thanks people :) appreciate it. :)

Answer #2

wow this sounds really good 10 definatly :)

Answer #3

scale of one to ten…one hundred :) I love poetry; that was great

Answer #4

awsome!!! you’re talented!

Answer #5

10 I love it

Answer #6

love it (not stupid at all)

Answer #7

thanks :)

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