New poem. Writtin bout an a** hole

We used to be best friends but now I hate you I wish you would disappear. I wish everything good in your life will go away. I hope the world turns it’s back on you. I wanna see your blood spill I want to see you bent over in pain. Suffering for you’re actions. Feeling all the pain and difficulties that you’ve caused others.

                                                                                                           -insanity™-

P.s beginner at poetry and I’m insanity

Answer #1

sorry. like I said im a beginner. this is the first hate thing that I’ve done. I’m not a generally angry or hateful person so it didnt come out too well. sorry but check out my love poem it’s helluva lot better then this piece of crap

Answer #2

Not so much a poem as a hate-filled screed. Wishing someone pain is better suited for the likes of emokids.com, not FunAdvice.

And you misspelled ‘its,’ ‘your,’ and incorrectly conjugated ‘to be’ in the second line.

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