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Love they say is

Love, they say is good, they say will save us. Love for my brother, my sister, for us. Love, like a mother’s. Love, like a father’s. Love, in a prayer, love is mine, as yours.

Love, that brings change, love, that holds our head high. Love, that whites the clouds, love, that blues the sky. Love, on your smile, love, on the hand you raise. Love, for your grieves. Love, for the ones you praise.

Love, a run to a tree I use to know. Love. Can’t you remember? You use to show. Love gained and love lost, make me remember… Love, when we hate most, keep us together.

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Answer #1

I LOVE IT!!!

Answer #2

Thanks, this one I kinda like it too. :)

Answer #3

wowch!! =] thats really good!! =] I really like how you put repition on the word love first–it makes the poem flow well. =] the great descriptions really bring out the imagery–it just paints a picture in our minds. ^^ I truly enjoyed this poem. ^^ Write on! =D

Answer #4

it was pretty good.:)

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