Is this a cute poem? ("A beautful moment in time")

my love is where you’r heart is, when you bring us together our heart beats in prifict harmony, the love we have is unbreakeable the way our soul’s conect it’s un makeable wish to be for ever you and i together can time be more beautiful, as we sit in this moment inlove, drop the sun drink the sea move the sky just for me that is why i cry too just know i love you

Answer #1

its kinda hard to show ur emotion when everytime u try u always feel lonesome the pain in ur heart the bliss of life trying to smile so hard but even that isnt suffice love poetry isnt the words but what comes from ur heart dont make it seems so hard words are the beauty but the soul is the best love me with all ur heart and leave out all the rest.

ur poetry is awesome kinda making me want to write some to. sorry

Answer #2

it sounds like to much effort was put into this. Poetry comes from tha heart and soul

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