How is this poem I wrote for my boyfriend?

You were the one The one I couldnt find But then you appeared Right in front of my eyes

I know you are mine Cant get you out of my mind Cant control my self I need medical help

If you were here, with me tonight Id read this to you one last time And it would sound so right You and me side by side

I have this sensation inside I cant leave it behind Were both living in the moment Together In our hearts forever I love you!!

Answer #1

aww, you wrote that for me?!?! hehehe

Answer #2

I love it..its nyce

Answer #3

that is really cute and sweet !

Answer #4

Aww that’s really lovely =] Soo thoughtful…:)

xxx

Answer #5

omgg. I like soo love it :]

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