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how much do you like my poem?

I just wrote about him on a blogging site and thought it was really cute and wanted peoples opinion on it,I don’t know if its an actual poem but,here it is…

…I like him so much,but its so pathetic how I’ve never even said a word to him. every time I see him in the hall,when our eyes meet,my heart skips a beat,I notice his beautiful features on his face. his eyes deep blue-ish green. his smile,so perfect,flawless,and before I know it, I have to catch my breathe.my head automattically goes down and a smile forms on my face.I’ve taught myself to remember I look stupid if im smiling at the ground for no apparent reason.but I cant help it. why was he smiling?because he likes me to?because he knows I like him?I just wish I could read his mind,unravel all the secrets,and let everything come out! he is so confusing. im one of those people who cant stand to not know things,and when it comes to him, I know nothing! he dates the pretty,popular,and beautiful girls,so what am I? a wisher,a dreamer,nothing more. just a girl,with a childesh crush so how did you like it?? is it actually considered a love poem?? and thanks for reading :)

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Answer #1

agreed with the above. It’s more like a descriptive essay.

Answer #2

That’s Not Really A Poem, Sorry. /:

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