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Another poem for those who liked the other one

The days fly by, turn into years and still, you lie into my ears Deny it again and again Its the way it all began

I was so innocent and pure now my heart needs a cure So much hurt, so much pain the peices will never fit the same

Say you love me, tell me you care brush your fingertips, through my hair Kiss my lips, hold me tight say everything, that sounds just right

In an instant it all goes down you decide to mess around Why me? Why me? I cry your just that kind of guy

My smile turned into a frown my whole world, upside down Never again will I play this game never again will I feel the same

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Answer #1

Thanks for submitting the poem, nice use of rhyme - aabb for the each stanza :)

I nuked the inflammatory stuff, we’re not playing that game here. Thanks.

Answer #2

woah I like your poems dey hve a powerful touch* 2 dem that I cn relate 2 =]

Answer #3

wow that poem was perfect =[) good job

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