Do you like this poem

We sit and laugh In your room But you stare at him I see your love bloom You cuddle with him I am ignored I walk out the door And say that im bored You two just stay And stare at your eyes I wish I could tell you But instead its all lies When I leave I drive off and cry You stand there Hugging that guy I love you so much Yes I have feelings too Your my best friend

Answer #1

mmm it’s pretty good I liked it;)

Answer #2

it’s good but sad ):

Answer #3

it is so good but the end need one more line that rymes mayb:

So no matter what ill always love you!

Answer #4

aw thats kinda sad:(

Answer #5

ummm its pretty good. just the beat to it is a little off. and I need more feeling coming from it

Answer #6

I like it

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