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my Poem Do you like it?

My love for you, why do I cry so many tears? If my love wasnt for you. You are sunshine, and I love you its true, my love for you is so true, your my world, my world is you. You id be 101% faithful, because faithful is true.. True to me, true to you, you were, and always are going to be the one I love, love one is you!. We can make things work if you let them to. Work is if you do to. Commitment isnt so much to ask, commitment equals you, & me.. Being loyal isnt much to ask either, loyal is you!. But its all because I love you! You for ever, as ever can be,but sometimes it just isnt love that can make it thru I can be sure its you I want, but what about you? By tears are true.! Just like my love is for you. I love you x

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Answer #1

its nice :-) I can almost hear your pain in your words! xo

Answer #2

u fink it good?

Answer #3

AWWW

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