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DISORIENTATED- peom
D isorientated, I should of hesitated, S o many regrets O f disappearing sets, R unning out of time I open up my mind, E nding in a daze N ever ending maze T aking every day A and still I feel the same, T oo much sympathy E lectric empathy D eep in sudden destiny.
what you think?!? very weird I know.
wow I really like it!
Its ok but it feels a little cold but thats just me but if you dont mind me asking what inspired it?
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