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Hey peeps, want to read my peom?

I no longer may be near you, Standing by your side. I know the feeling in the air, But in a way I have not died. I know youll miss me, Ill miss you. The feeling does not lie. But try to keep and upbeat smile, Because in a way, Have I really died? Because I wil be near you, I will be by your side,. Because always remember, That I will never really die.

Ps-sorry about the grammer, please be honest, because I might want to enter in a poetry contest.

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Answer #1

I really like it!!! Totally enter! They will like it! Grammer needs to be fixed but I know what you are saying! It’s not HORRIBLE mistakes… They are just minor…like… ‘ needs to be here and here!…and that’s basicly it!!! BUT!!! GOOD! I love it!

Answer #2

another stuning masterpeice!! can you do any better? ‘cause you don’t have to.

Answer #3

hey thats a good poem I bed you will win :)

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