Peom, do you like it

Tell me what I can do to make it better! please

MY ROOMS

Rooms, bleek and gray Finding no purpose but to fill the deep waters that run from my eyes That leaves empty spaces for fears and lies Nor tomorrow or today Shall I wash theese feelings away For all of my tries To escape it has ties That pulls me down every single day So in that room I lay Rooms, bleek and gray

Answer #1

it sucks.

Answer #2

eh its ok

Answer #3

I love it.

Answer #4

its awEsme! don’t change 1ne thing :)

Answer #5

DONT CHANGE IT!

its PERFECT!! just add a lil more punctuation

Answer #6

Very nice. I like it a lot.

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