Could someone please give me some feedback on my poem?

I need it for school and I cant freaking write one so please someone help

' Suicide Saviour' Him in mind, my feet on the edge,jumping into my one good friend,the ocean the one thing that never ends...

Please give me your input on my poem. I know it is short but maybe that means more people will read it. Right now I am c...

Help! I need to write a narrative poem about summer and it has to be rhyming! I already turned it in, but the teacher said to...

How one can be ever so near yet a mystery I could never tell How I can be acquainted to thee And fail to tell your desires ...

Will you please take some time and let me know what you think of my poem or what I could do better? It's about a young girl w...

Sometimes I feel trapped, Like a hamsterin a bal. There is no way to get out, And no one hears me call. Iwant to push the esc...

It hasn't got a name, you can come up with one for it if you like. Each time I cry, I hear all the angels laughs, and all th...

Hi guys. I write a fair bit of poetry and recently posted some on a poetry website that was supposed to provide feedback. I d...

Her is the beigining alex walks to a door he opens the door and their was a squeeqy sound ...