Another poem what do you think!!

That sunshine feeling in your heart, Like nothing could ever tear you apart. Thee many powers of it’s own, Something you coudn’t get alone. The loving smile on his face, His warming heart to embrace. That burnig kiss that our lips share, His promise that he’ll always be there. This wonderful feeling is truly from above. This magical thing is what we call love :)

Answer #1

it is nice?

Answer #2

I LOVE it!!!

Answer #3

I like it, I love the way you expressed the kiss I really get that, and the bit about the sunshine feeling in your heart I get that aaall the time…

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