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another poem =D

hey just wondering what you think of my poem about how little life is appreciated…=)

Never plan ahead. Live in the present. Cherish my gift to you. You take for granted the first breath that escapes your lungs, waking up, growing old. The words I’ll do it tomorrow are imprinted on your lips. I give you life and can easily take it away. I’ve suffered so you could see the world through innocent eyes. Life is an opportunity benefit from it.

Remember I’ve given you the chance to wake up and see Today. Some people don’t have today, some have never Got to feel the summer breeze or watch the sunset. Observation is my fortay. I send angels to guide you. Watch over you in times of need. I could have been that stranger you met last week.

You don’t know me. I come from above. I watch life as it passes you by, I see how little
Is appreciated or remembered. I made you, created you, Gave you life. Ill wait for you way up high until I’m prayed to. Searched for. Found.

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Omg! I’m loving those poems :-] xx

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