Another poem

You are amazing cant you see

Its hard to believe you’d be with me

Can I give you my whole heart?

Or would you tear it all apart?

Would you take care of it for me?

Or just let it go and set me free?

I will never be the same

You’ve struck me deep, and healed my pain.

Your everything to me,

I want you to be free

You are the fire in my eyes.

I want to see your beauty shine.

Can I please just hold you tight?

Or would you put up a fight?

Will you say my name again?

I love you, let me be your man.

I’ll wait forever just to be

The one who sets your spirit free

These words cannot express for me

How much I love you baby, please

Open the door and let me in

And I will never leave again

You are the one I want for me

So lets run away, oh baby, please

Answer #1

wow, that’s beautiful. you should definitely show it to your girlfriend; she would love it. I give it a perfect 10.

Answer #2

when I was reading that I was thinking about one person the whole time, that was freaking awesome.

Answer #3

oh, I’m crying now, that’s just so beautiful, you’re so talented. I can relate, I love this poem soo much!♥

Answer #4

Someone’s in love…

…I like it

Answer #5

Nice job. Its really good :)

Answer #6

wow, thank you all very much, I’ve never shown my writing to anyone. means a lot.

she is what keeps my heart beating :)

Answer #7

aww you are so in love!!! I love it Im like so crying awww!!!

Answer #8

wow, very nice

Answer #9

O_o

WOW!! someones in love!!! that is sooo sweet!!

show it to your girl, you WILL leave her SPEACHLESS!!

Answer #10

Awsum…your like amazing at writting poems..terrific

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