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Another new poem
He denies her,
She denies everyone around her,
They think that the other one is
pretending to not see each other,
But they have one thing in comin: they
both have the same nightmare…they both
see that day…the day they both died on the
inside…
They both gave up EVERYTHING for
their familys,
For their loved ones…
They were once wealthy, loved, respected,
But none of that mattered more then their
loved ones…
They pass each other day in and day out
but they already made a promise to the one
who granted the wish to keep their
familys safe…
They promise that they would stay loyal to
him… but how could he ask that?
All they wanted was to keep their familys
safe,
But he made them do his bidding,
HIS dirty work,
All the kills that were reported,
It was his job to do,
But they swore to do it give up a
future for them selfs,
Give up LOVE but then he stops in the hall
And starts talking to her,
And she talks back to him & they make plans
to escape
BUT what they didn’t know was he was listening,
So when they finally make the plans to leave
and they are ready to go and he stops them
And says “where do you think your going?!”
And they try to walk around him but he grabs
the man by the arm and orders him to let the
Girl go…and so he does…
He tells her to run and so she does…
But ad far as the man he was excuted the
next day…and as far as the girl she found
Her family and when she heard what
happened to him half of her died all over
Again…
What do you think?
u are so good
Um love and death, and that nobody really has control if you, only if you let them
It’s a bit confusing as to what the story line is, and there are a couple of spelling errors…can you explain what it is actually about? :)
I’m confushed. I didn’t get any of it. sorry.
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