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He denies her, She denies everyone around her, They think that the other one is pretending to not see each other, But they have one thing in comin: they both have the same nightmare…they both see that day…the day they both died on the inside… They both gave up EVERYTHING for their familys, For their loved ones… They were once wealthy, loved, respected, But none of that mattered more then their loved ones… They pass each other day in and day out but they already made a promise to the one who granted the wish to keep their
familys safe… They promise that they would stay loyal to him… but how could he ask that? All they wanted was to keep their familys safe, But he made them do his bidding, HIS dirty work, All the kills that were reported, It was his job to do, But they swore to do it give up a future for them selfs, Give up LOVE but then he stops in the hall And starts talking to her, And she talks back to him & they make plans to escape BUT what they didn’t know was he was listening, So when they finally make the plans to leave and they are ready to go and he stops them And says “where do you think your going?!” And they try to walk around him but he grabs the man by the arm and orders him to let the Girl go…and so he does… He tells her to run and so she does… But ad far as the man he was excuted the next day…and as far as the girl she found Her family and when she heard what happened to him half of her died all over Again…

What do you think?

Answer #1

u are so good

Answer #2

Um love and death, and that nobody really has control if you, only if you let them

Answer #3

It’s a bit confusing as to what the story line is, and there are a couple of spelling errors…can you explain what it is actually about? :)

Answer #4

I’m confushed. I didn’t get any of it. sorry.

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