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What is another line for my poem?

So I wanna write a poem to the guy I like telling him he should open up and not be afraid to . So this is how far I got : Open up , Let yourself go, Things getting shaky, Just go with the flow, I hope we can try it, Just set your heart free. Through thick and thin, You always have me. I’ll give you my heart, I need some more sentences I just don’t know what else to writee.comment it with a new linee !

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Answer #1

Through thick and thin, You always have me. I’ll give you my heart, It always has been yours. Close your eyes, Tell me what you see. You and me, Together we can be. All you have to do, Open up to me. Open up , Let yourself go.

Answer #2

I like it :)

Answer #3

If you end up with this guy, you will be spending the entire relationship trying to pull him out of his shell. When a guy wants a girl bad enough, he will do what it takes to get you. Let him work for YOU, not the other way around.

Answer #4

I´ll give you my everything

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