7 Ages of Man : Modern Version

Is this a good poem? Were supposed to write a modern version of “The 7 Ages of Man”, by Shakespeare.

Everyone in the world play a part, Has a purpose, Even if it is unknown in the, Beginning. It is the cute, attention seeking toddler, Durious and dependent, Seeking love and reassurance. Then the excited, school-going chid, Eventually growing older, getting a job, drivin, getting a degree, Becoming wiser, as one enters a big harsh world, Now making a living, promotin a change. Next, the spouse an parentt, with children running about. And soon, the once small children, Taking the same steps, growing older wiser, Making memories and mistakes, Becoming independent, Whild the parent and one’s spouse, Are also growing older, Making and reliving las memories, While experiencing health problems and always being fatigued, And losing all one has left, To eventually come to the end of a timeless story, Life.

Copyrighted by: Ivana Van Tol

Answer #1

thnx im in IB (Internation Bacculaureat Program) - I think I spelled the word with the B wrong. type in IB Program on google. theres a website. :) thnx again

Answer #2

I had to do this a year ago and my class is top set (supposedly smart people). Yours is WAY better than any of ours put together.

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