Funadvice Logo
Explore Join
More Art, Writing & Literature Questions

2 old poems I found

We walked alone like creatures extinct along abandoned streets. I loved you more than God could ever imagine. The leaves flew like birds from the branches as the clouds broke down into little doves that fell like dead snow. Your arms got stuck around my waist. And my eyes were chained to your pretty face. Our kisses stopped the world like your hair trapped in motionless wind. When I turned around, and your eyes were still on fire, I lifted your legs and walked into the eternal shadows.

You are the rain that falls, the sun that shines,

the angel that flys and takes over minds.

Without you, the world would have no beauty.

From the grass, to the flowers,

to the bushes and the glowing trees,

growing from the water and light that you provide.

You are the beautiful, pleasent breeze,

blowing peacefully, forever by my side.

Become an Expert →
Answer #1

awww these poems are just truly heart mealting! their the type that would make a girl smile, when she’s having a bad day! - heck, they made me smile! (:

Answer #2

both so great, and very descriptive. hope you’re keeping all these together. you could become famous someday because you have such great talent!!!

Answer #3

very sweet…I luv poetry…share more people!!!

Answer #4

awww I luv em both:) your good

Answer #5

ohh my lord…u r really good!!!

More Like This
Ask an advisor one-on-one!
Advisor

Diamond Nail Supplies

Nail Supplies, Beauty Essentials, Salon Equipment

Advisor

Shopnobilap

Literature, Online Publishing, Community

Advisor

Silverhints

Poetry, Shayari, Ghazal