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Who would like to help me with my story?
So there is this girl. She was having a really tough time and she ran away. This guy(that is always mean to her)and a group of people came searching for her and she keeps telling them to go away but they won’t. the guy that is always means to her finds her about to do heroin but stops her. He then sees scars and her wrists and she tells him about how she used to cut and then she kisses him! what should happen next?
Have her back up afterwards, stumbling well he follows after her, trying to unbutton her pants and kiss her, but she pushes him away at first. He’s assertive and continues to make out with her and so she goes along with it, but says no inbetween the kissing as he also pulls down her pants. She can either go along with it or pull them up and run out of the room as she zips them up.
Damn, I should write a story. Haha :P
Wow that sounds good…
Maybe you could have the guy give her a disgusted look and start to walk away. Then have the girl chase him making him wait up and have her cry into his arms. Explaining that she doesn’t want him to go and that she needs a friend. Keep a suspence going till the end of the book when they both kiss each other.
This is just some ideas let me know if it helped
The plot sounds awesome so far!!
May give both of them looks of surprise. Like the girl wasn’t expecting to do that, but she feels like she found someone to confide in. She backs up, saying sorry (stuttering and still surprised that she kissed him). And what about this? She tries to leave still saying sorry, but the boy grabs her by the arm and brings her into his arms, kissing her again. Maybe have the plot as “aggression is the greatest sign of affection” sort of thing. Like, the boy has always liked her, but he has always been aggressive because he doesn’t know what to do. let me know if that was helpful or if you need anymore advice on it!
Have him give her a look of suprise. and have her like blush furiously and try to run away. Make him stop her… maybe he can have some story like that if you want soppy. Or have him act like he is going to help her then ditch her later on?
Just some ideas
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