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I’ve been acting, This entire time, My heart was hijacked, But it wasn’t a crime.

I never loved you, Why won’t you believe, Because this is all true, You’re just to naïve.

The kisses all fake, My heart artificial, To you it was heartbreak, And I was the devil.

So just leave me alone, There’s no room for you, So let me put in my other earphone, And never let this scar me like a tattoo.

My eyes left with tears, I didn’t want to leave you hurt, And yet for many years, You were never alert.

Hundreds of fights, Nights filled of screams, In the middle of twilight, Us going to the extreme.

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Answer #1

I just seen your poem and thought it was really good. I think that you should try to have your poems published. everyone would love them. I do. keep them coming.

Answer #2

I really like this poem. It is very good. I especially liked the part where you say “And I was the devil.” That was the most powerful section to me!

Answer #3

again another great poem. I really understand where you are coming from when you express yourself. we have a lot in common. lets see some more.

Answer #4

One of the more decent ones that have been put up on this site, I’ll tell you what. Haha, Im not one for poems about love, or faking love, but I liked it.

Answer #5

I liked it a lot. really good job, I love reading poems and wish I could right them im not good at all :/

Answer #6

I loved that poem!! I couldnt write like that at ALL!

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