Who: I need help?

This isn’t a poem. This is lines that you wrote and tried to make rhyme. The best poems don’t have to rhyme. It should be about how you feel; the poem should flow easily and roll off the tounge. There shouldn’t be a period at the end of every line; that defeats the purpose of the poem. ‘When it is not applaud’ First of all, this line doesn’t rhyme with ‘flawed’ and it should be ‘applauded’. Also, why would love have to be applauded for it not to be wrecked? That makes not sense to me. You contradicted yourself. You said ‘love is perfect. love is flawed.’ So, which one is it? Perfect or flawed? The first stanza doesn’t even make sense to me. ‘Love is the chest. That holds my curse.’ ??? What chest? What curse? If you want to make this poem work, you have to elaborate and not just write random words. Also, in the last stanza. ‘Sweet’ and ‘Beat’ don’t rhyme. I suggest you start the poem over. Write how you feel about her, not what love is. Write about the quirks she has and how you love them. She’ll appreciate it a lot more. It doesn’t have to rhyme, nor does it have to have periods at the end of every line. It should only have periods when you finish a complete thought. It was ok, but nothing special. I’d like to help you on your next poem.