I need help with a story .

The damp, musty old house had such a fowl smell coming from it, I couldn’t help but press my nose to my sleeve. “It’s really that bad, huh?” Jordan who conveniently happened to have a stuffed up nose, laughed.

thats what I have soo far & I reallly neeed help PLEASE help me for the next sentence

Answer #1

Yeah give us some background so we can expand it :)

Answer #2

“Lucky you can’t smell this!” I exclaimed. “How are we gonna get rid of this smell?”

“When my nostrils open back up I will offer some suggestions.” Jordan replied, with a somewhat irritating sense of humor.

I could offer more but I don’t really know where the story is going. Whether they just bought the house or if they are entering a friends house?

Answer #3

first of all, its foul, not fowl. ^_^ anyways…”Just my luck…” I grumbled;

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