What is your oppinion on this poem, #2 lol!!?

Sorry bout before ^.^.. here it is..

Let Me In

I’m standing here waiting outside your door I’d like to come in but your heart is to sore The pathway is blocked by the pain you feel Afraid Ill re-open the wounds you’ve healed

I want you to trust me, to go for the ride But the key to that door’s hidden far inside I wont force it open to barge my way through Cause that’d be disgusting, Id seem widely untrue

You asked if Id be there with you and that group Id be there in seconds, after diving those hoops No one could hold me or tie me to stay For I feel for you enough to bring the next day

And I know that your leaving, It hurts my one heart To know that those people could tear you apart Not knowing if you will return to this place For those cruel people may have you on chase

I know the time apart wont change anything Know that Id wait for you, and never give in Ill hope and Ill wait for your wonderful return And you shall relax with that break that you’d earn

Your never out my mind, your even in my dreams And sometimes the scenes, they cause many screams Though not all are bad, but that’s not the point I want you to know, (long ass pause!!!) that I love you, disjoint

I want you to realize that Ill always be here My hands outstretched ready for your every tear I wont turn and leave you, cause things that you’ve done Ill be by your side while all moons turn to sun

Please don’t just push me strait out of your life Unless there’s no feelings, your mind is just strife I just want a chance, only one you see So Please, don’t slam the door on me